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26 Re: kaba works... on Sun May 30, 2010 12:17 pm

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27 Re: kaba works... on Sun May 30, 2010 12:24 pm

Firstly, the bg is too plain and the effects don't go well with eachother. You need to either use C4Ds or use the blending tool. Try doing one of those, moving the effects till it looks right, using the blending mode, again till it looks right. 7.5/10


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28 Re: kaba works... on Sun May 30, 2010 4:35 pm

u need to fit colour and to use smaller sigs and fonts...


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29 Re: kaba works... on Sun May 30, 2010 6:08 pm

UltimatuS wrote:u need to fit colour and to use smaller sigs and fonts...

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30 Re: kaba works... on Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:21 pm

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31 Re: kaba works... on Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:53 pm

its good u should use some stroke, and u should change colour of bleding... brown or idk and btw that is too much bleding...


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32 Re: kaba works... on Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:38 pm

Everything is good besides the smoke that ruins it. Unfortunately the smoke is about 50% of the siggy.
Also, you should try more fonts.

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33 Re: kaba works... on Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:26 pm

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34 Re: kaba works... on Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:08 pm

bg is good but u should use blue colour... render isnt blended and that ruins a little... and text is Blue Eye's Dragon or Ultimate Blue Eye's Dragon... idk im not sure...


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35 Re: kaba works... on Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:37 am

I still think it looks good though, the blue against the grey-ish and black background works quite well, the text... hmmm!! not to sure about though.
But overall, good work mate. ii

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36 Re: kaba works... on Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:12 am

It's important to blend your render in the background, putting a blue render with a brown/grey background isn't the way.
Here's how different it would look with just minor changes, take in mind that I don't have the psd file, and had to modify it through a raw pic.

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This is somewhat how it would look if you balanced the background and changed text. While it still looks sucky (due to lack of psd file D:) it does look more in place.

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37 Re: kaba works... on Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:51 pm

I agree with Mizara....you should fit color of render and background......it's better.

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38 Re: kaba works... on Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:04 pm

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39 Re: kaba works... on Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:54 pm

It's pretty good, I think you should add light effects, and other C4D to it though Wink

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40 Re: kaba works... on Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:32 am

Nice...i think you shoud change text,style of text...

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41 Re: kaba works... on Sat Aug 14, 2010 5:52 pm

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42 Re: kaba works... on Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:04 pm

its cool but i think u should blend a little ur render...


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43 Re: kaba works... on Sat Aug 14, 2010 11:54 pm

Its ok but a bit plain for me, but very good.

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44 Re: kaba works... on Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:54 am

Blending needs to be done little bit better, but otherwise it's pretty ok, Wink 8/10

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45 Re: kaba works... on Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:36 am

UltimatuS wrote:its cool but i think u should blend a little ur render...
I agree with you...but very nice....

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46 Re: kaba works... on Mon Aug 16, 2010 9:22 am

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47 Re: kaba works... on Mon Aug 16, 2010 11:02 am

hmm, nice, text is bad Sad It should be bleded better in the left corner of "W" Sad


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